Limerick Poem

Today I learnt how to write a limerick poem. I struggled to to come up with rhyming words and make it flow but my poem now poem flows and rhymes. I had help to make it rhyme and make it flow and next time I think I would be able to do it by my self.

Camp

Camp

We have just got back from camp it was so much fun. We did heaps of activites like kyaking wasterslides building a raft and human fusball these are only some of the activites we have done. My favourite activite was when we went down to the river and built rafts and went down the waterslide. The food was so great espically yhe pudding. We went to bed late and got up early so when we got back we were all super tired.

The fishing andventure

The fishing adventure

Pua cast his line out from the dinghy and it snagged straight away. Uncle tried to help him reel it in but it wouldn’t budge. Suddenly the skies turned grey and the sea got choppy. And a giant pirate ship bubbled up from the depths of the ocean, dwarfing Uncles dinghy.

Merman/pirates have been living in the ancient abden pirate ship.One of them said confused “how did we get here above the water?” another one said “I don’t know but we will have to investigate.”They all looked over the edge of the and saw Pua and his Uncle.They threw a rope over the edge for them to climb up.The merman/pirates wanted to know how the ship came a float.Pua and his Uncle filled them in and went to go climb back down but there dinghy had floated away because they forgot to put down the anchor.So now they were traped on a ship that could sink at any second.

The merman/pirates said “make yourself at how but we mainly eat seaweed soup so get use to that oh and also give yourselves a self led tour of the place and the best part is coming soon we will be going back under water.”Pua and his Uncle went on with there self led tour and tried to come up with a way to get of the ship, they were on the lookout for something that they could sail away on.

They found a loose wood platform and some treasure and because they found the treasure they were trying to sneak off the ship.They were just about to jump off the ship when they heard someone say “get em.” They got caught and then got tied to the flag pole. Pua and his Uncle heard them trying discuss a punishment while they were trying to make an escape plan. They didn’t come up with a plan 1 because they didn’t have much to work with and 2 it didn’t take long for the merman/pirates to come up with a punishment.

“Here they come” said Pua with fear.We are going to make you walk the plank and we are taking away your life jackets oh and one more thing you will be doing it tonight and until then you will remain tied up.

Pua and his Uncle were now ready to walk the plank of course they couldn’t turn back. So they did it and no one realised that the boat had drifted away to a close island and so they weaved through the water all the way to the island. On the Island were coconut trees so for 2 days they drank the milk from the coconuts until the rescue team came and saved them.

Writing Reflection

Over this past term we have been learning how to describe a moment in time.Writing Reflection

I have been learning to use figurative langue which is similes, metaphors, personification and more.We also have been learning to write in first person which is like "I am" or "we are" and we also have been learning to write in present tense which is we are going shopping not we have been shopping.This has been fun but we have been doing it a lot so it is getting boring.

Here is an example

Super Solver

My name is Talia Kent I  have a friend called Ashley Axe together we make a great team.I am superhero and Ashley is my sidekick.Mother by day superhero by night.

So I am a superhero I bet you're itching to find out my powers.My powers are dangorsley deadly.I have griped gloves and when I hold my palm up lightning bolts come powering out.Also if her fingers can touch you when she is wearing her gloves an eltric wave will travel through your body.Her gloves give her the power to hold 1000 tones.My sky blue full body suit gives me the power to walk through walls.When you tap her charcaol beltbuckle a deflector sheild expands out.I wear a face mask  to hide my identy which also gives me the power to breath underwater.At night the mask gives her night vision.I have a shoulder pad on each shoulder and on the pads are one rifle.She waers rocket boots so she can soar over the city.

My sidekick is Ashley Axe she helps me dominate my enemy's. She doesn’t have any superpowers but she carries round stun lasers and holds a charcoal black shield with a bronze star in the middle.She also wears rocket boots so she can soar through the sky following me.Just  to finish off her look she wears a navy cape with her name written in cream white writing.Although she does some phenomenal work I don’t pay her but that is so we can keep our cover.

Venum is my arch enemy he is ruthless. Venum is so selfish he has his own recipe to make drugs.You are probaly asking what type of drugs.The medicine drugs.Venum lives in a town called devilville and there his disquise is a doctor.His drugs are poisenus and if he maneges to get it into you atomatically become under his controll.He uses the liquid at the doctors he works at.If a kid  comes in for an imunisation he will take them and instead of  injecting them with the right medicine he will give them his medicine.Never go to the doctors in devilville.

Finally me and my sidekick have made a plan and are brave enough to take on Venum.We both flew to devilville and went to the doctors but it was his day off.So we went to the forest.We had been looking for 1 million years well at least it felt like it.We were getting to the end of the forest when we found a trap door that went down into a whole and on it said do not enter other wise you will regret it.Strat away we thought we found him.We opened the trap door but first we had to get geared up.We slid down and the first thing we saw was a sience lab with jug filled with a slimey green liqued.There is a man over there wearing a white lab coat.A little whisper came from ashley but the lab picked it up and then suddenly a tremendous noise went BEEp BEEP  introder alert.”Oh no we better make a dash for the door.But first just let me catch a glimps of his face.Great now lets go.”

I have to go back home to see my 2 kids and husband but I have to break the truth to them that their dad is venum and I have to tell him how I know.All these ways to tell him were scanning my mind but only 3 were realistic.They 3 were text, call or wait until he got home.We waited 1 month for him to arrive but he never turned up and he wouldn’t return my text or calls so that was the end of that.

The End